On The Run pg 24

Opening Sentence

Here's another page
yay

In case you can't read my handwriting
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?-You need to leave
Everyone else-WHAT?!?!
?-get inside, Lubox
Lubox-But mom-
?-Now!!
Jacob-Miss, if there's any trouble, i'm sure we can help...
?-You've done enough, thank you
Emma-Can't we at least have some food?
?-I wish i could...
??-Don't even bother, Gilette!!

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this was a good page.
'nuff said

the fourth panel was an interesting story. all i did was just drew a bunch of lines and it looks like shadows. looks really cool

Something seems off in this town, especially with that last character being so hostile.
blah i cant type anything

Hope you like it

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I give credit to ~Ray-Wind for giving me permission to base my comics on hers. any characters or references brought up are from her (that cainolou lady in the last panel, at least her species )